tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3357148692804390879.post2066226811921875493..comments2023-10-01T13:37:13.077+13:00Comments on Sarah: Feeling Like Jumping into the waterPES 2012 Blogs Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16237049368913248291noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3357148692804390879.post-83470661018860663752012-05-16T07:48:57.093+12:002012-05-16T07:48:57.093+12:00Well done Sarah, this is your best piece of writin...Well done Sarah, this is your best piece of writing so far this year.<br /><br />You have some very interesting sentences. You have also done well to use a variety of sentence lengths. I also am pleased to see a variety of sentence beginnings.<br /><br />Please keep this up.Mr Chris Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912841501575471267noreply@blogger.com